Elevator Pitch No. 4

The feedback that I received on my last elevator pitch consisted mostly of people telling me to work on my body language. I don't like public speaking and for some reason have really struggled with filming these videos but I tried my best. Most people liked my actual commentary but told me to simply work on how I present myself.

What I changed this time due to this feedback was trying to act more relaxed and comfortable in front of the camera. I'm not sure I did any better but I definitely tried my best to and even recorded multiple takes.